Tuesday, September 8, 2009

The rain is dropping on my head. I see puddles can you see the mud? We hear crash .

Then I can hear bang . I'm scared and i'm dizzy. My heard feel funny.

By Hayley

1 comment:

  1. Room 4, your stories are FABULOUS! You have all used such great adjectives. It made your stories very interesting to read! I can't wait to read some more!
    Well done!

    Miss Mitchell

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